reflection

in this class, I got many knowledges about paragraph such as descriptive, cause and effect, illustration, etc. when I presented my paragraph about descriptive in the class, my friends gave comments all. they said to me that my paragraph is not descriptive but difinition or explanation. after debating, all of my friends agree that my paragraph is incorrect paragraph.hehe... because in the content of paragraph is "ambigu" but for me, it does not matter. I will make new paragraph about correct descriptive paragraph. thanks for my writing lecturer who always support me.