MOTIVASI KU DI HADAPAN LAYAR

Jangan menyerah!!!

Satu kata bagiku untuk sahabat Z adalah KEBANGKITAN

Bertubi-tubi cobaan dan halangan menghampirimu

Bahkan membuatmu hampir mati

Jiwa yang hancur karena DIA duhai Wanita itu.

Cinta adalah kesempurnaan

Semua orang menginginkannya

Tapi tak semua berakhir indah

Kisahnya membuat kita paham arti Hidup

Arti sebuah kasih sayang

Sahabat, engkau datang untuk menolongku

Sahabat adalah tiang hidup

Menolong saat terjatuh, membantu saat kita butuh

Hadirmu mengubah hidupnya

Yang kini termashur dan dikenal

Kaulah pujangga Z

Terima kasih sahabat Sunil

Yang mempersembahkan Cerita dibalik layar ini

Saya sangat tergugah

MEMOTIVASI ku untuk berkerja dan berkarya

Saya bersyukur kepada MU ya Robb

Memberikan kesempatan untuk menyaksikan cerita ini.

Sempat berpikir bahwa apa indahnya cerita ini

Tanpa bersabar menunggu sampai selesai

Cerita yang penuh nilai estetika

Penuh gejolak rasa

Penuh tiupan emosi

Duka, lara, sedih, semangat, salut, bangga, kanggum menjadi satu

Yaitu Bangkit

Sahabat Hayati ku

Kehadiranmu membuat sahabatku menjadi manusia

Manusia yang luar biasa

Seperti rasa yang dialaminya sampai mendarah daging

Rasa itu tak kan pernah mati

Sumpah MATI pun terucap

Agar kau tetap hidup dalam karya-karyanya

Entah mengapa, saya bertindak menulis ini

Setelah usai menyaksikan cerita ini

Saya sangat termotivasi

Saya sangat tersentuh melihat kegigihan seorang pujangga

Yang lahir dari tanah Minang

Dan yang sukses di tanah jawa

Dengan goresan tinta dan pengalamannya

Terima kasih Tenggelamnya Kapal Van der Wick

Kisahmu begitu indah dan luar biasa.                                                                                     

By: Ogiey

reflection

in this class, I got many knowledges about paragraph such as descriptive, cause and effect, illustration, etc. when I presented my paragraph about descriptive in the class, my friends gave comments all. they said to me that my paragraph is not descriptive but difinition or explanation. after debating, all of my friends agree that my paragraph is incorrect paragraph.hehe... because in the content of paragraph is "ambigu" but for me, it does not matter. I will make new paragraph about correct descriptive paragraph. thanks for my writing lecturer who always support me. 

My reflection

To know the types of  paragraph is depend on the writers’ comprehension, where the writer has to focus and really understand about what is the main idea, content and characteristic of the paragraph that had been analyzed or written. If the writers can explain the paragraph by detail analysis, it will be a good proses  of paragraph analysis. Sometimes, the other readers judge a paragraph only the part of the content. They did not read at the characteristic of the paragraph, in particular is main idea. So it will make controvertion in forum.  The most importantly to know about the types of paragraph is from authors’ purpose. After we know of the purpose of authors, the readers could comprehend the paragraph. Be the best readers must read the paragraph carefully. In order they did not wrong to apparaise a paragraph.

Our Lovely Parents

Remember your mother

Remember your father

Because they are your parent of your life

Do you ever blame them?

Do you ever snap them?

If you ever like that, you must say it

Asstagfirullahaladzim.....

Keep attitude to your mother

Keep attitude to your father

Please make heart of our paents to be happy

How many prestations you give

How many respects do you show

Please don’t make their heart to be disappointed

Just have to say

Asstagfirullahaladzim......

By: yogi

Paragraph

At this time, I would like to convey about a paragraph, what is a paragraph? after I read the text that had been post by my lecturer of about a paragraph. According me, paragraph is a group of sentences that convey an idea. every paragraphs has main idea and others sentences is supporting sentences. the important sentence in a paragraph is topic sentence, because it will develop the main idea to under consideration a topic sentence it. finally the paragraph has closing sentence that called conclusion in the end.
A good paragraph has:
• a topic sentence stating the main point of the paragraph,
• supporting sentences with details and specific
examples as proof of your point,
• logical, coherent thoughts that are developed in order from one sentence to the next, and
• a concluding idea that wraps up the point of the paragraph.
and A good topic sentence:
• informs the reader of the subject that will be discussed in the paragraph,
• asserts the writer’s point of view or attitude,
• intrigues the reader to continue reading,
• creates a sense of action, and
• is not vague, rambling, too narrow or too broad.

There are seven types of paragraph development:
1. Narration paragraph
2. Definition paragraph
3. Comparison
4. Classification Paragraph
5. Explanation Paragraph
6. Description Paragraph
7. Exposition

That all what I know about Paragraph base on text

that I have read, thank you.